But what does that mean?
And how do we know if we’re telling or showing?
A good way is to read your chapter aloud. If it sounds like Aunt Frieda telling about her latest trip—you’re telling. It’s the Dragnet style of writing. Remember the old TV show where the guy says,
“Just the facts, Ma’am.”
You can find many telling troubles by hunting for was and were.
EX: She was tired. That’s telling.
Instead, write—She identified with the wilted daisy in the vase and drooped onto the couch. And you can see the character being tired. That’s showing.
There are sneakier ways for telling to creep into your writing. Back story is full of telling sentences. That’s why your story’s pace shudders to a screeching crawl. If it reads like a history lesson or travelogue, you are telling the reader what you want them to know instead of letting them discover along with your characters what they need to know.
Use dialogue to sprinkle facts in the story.
He clenched his fistHis face darkened.
Think about body language and show the reader your character’s emotions.
A last hint about telling. Be specific.
So let the show go on and write lively.
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